Activity 7
I did the five-second test with my husband on this website. We both came up with the same fatal flaws, things that make this home page absolutely atrocious.
First of all, the header is poorly organized (discussed in The Non-Designer’s Design Book (3rd Edition) by Robin Williams) and suffers from proximity (chapter two) and alignment (chapter three) issues. First, the title of the page doesn’t stand out because the phone number is the same size, and because the phone number is closer to the central area of the page, when the eyes naturally fall when first loading a page, both of us read the phone number BEFORE the page title, leading to confusion and a feeling of being “lost”. The second thing noticed was not the navigation or a focal point, but the fact that there is an overwhelming amount of text and links filling the page, with relatively minimal organization. As my husband aptly put it, “I see a whole bunch of crap that I don’t feel like reading.” That’s exactly how I felt, too – overwhelmed and instantly turned-off from this page.
This page would very much benefit from some organizational help, and perhaps having the text and links split onto separate pages that could be incorporated into the front page – for instance, instead of listing all of camouflage items in the right column, there could be a category or a page for camouflage items, which could be linked with an attractive image and text advertising the presence of camouflage items on a page. Same for the Fall/Winter Military clothing, the clothing of the brand Propper, et cetera. Splitting up all of that content and making it easy to navigate to the category you would like, and find what you are looking for – this is something that would benefit this site greatly.
Now here is a website that is well-organized, and has intent. Upon visiting the website, my eye is drawn to the focal point of the page, which is the changing image at the center. The navigation contains important items, such as well-categorized products on the sidebar (and organized in two separate ways that people may wish to browse them by, at that), and more simplified navigation is shown across the top. The right-hand side shows a cart, signifying that you can purchase items here, and you have no doubt from the beginning as to what sort of item it is that is being sold. There is a search box, though it doesn’t catch the eye as easily. It is, however, easy to find if you’re looking for it. The right side also shows best-sellers, which alerts a potential customer as to what is popular, and may grab their eye if they happen to also be looking for those popular items. And as you scroll down, you begin to see secondary content, such as other popular items and services available to customers. Finally, there is a secondary navigation including a site map and a FAQ, which doesn’t detract from the page, but lends itself to availability should someone be looking for it. The copyright and legal garble appears in the same area, in much smaller text, so that it doesn’t attract the eye unless one is looking for it. All in all, this home page seems effective – it speaks clearly to its intended audience, is easy to decipher and navigate, and is easy on the eyes. Well done.
This is another example of a well-planned website. Again, there is a focal point that immediately informs you of the intent of this website (if the name didn’t give it away enough). This focal point, as in the first site, alerts you to special deals and shows you what they have to offer you. This page’s shopping cart is not as obvious as the other website, but it makes up for it by having the search bar more accessible than the last page – and as with the search bar last time, the shopping cart is not hard to find if you’re looking for it. Again, the left side has extensive navigation displayed in an organized manner, with simplified navigation across the top. Secondary content such as featured items and best-sellers begin to show up below the focal point, and catch the eye as it begins to drift down the page. The use of simple, explanatory images enhances the ability to scan the page for specific items or types of items. As you scroll down, you can also see additional options for customers, similar to the first website – services such as mailing lists and referral programs. And finally, scrolling all the way down, you can navigate much more specifically. This navigation doesn’t detract from the effect of the site because it’s so far down on the page – if you’ve scrolled to this point, you may very well be looking for exactly this sort of thing. And finally, at the very end, is the text-only navigation line, which includes items not shown above, such as a site map, privacy policy, and special information and forms – items that you may want a shortcut to. Below this is the credits/copyright/legal mumbo-jumbo, again in smaller text, so you will see it if you’re looking for it, but it won’t catch the eye if you’re not. Overall good, clearly laid-out and easily navigated. Kudos.
First reaction: “What. The crap. Is this?!” Flashing images, a background that severely interferes with readability further down the page, flashing text, confusing organization, too much clip-art, too much movement… I could go on forever. This is a classic example of what not to do when designing a website. They clearly tried to appeal to the “ooh, shiny” instinct of humans, but it really just gives me a migraine. There’s no continuity, no cohesive feeling. I find myself lost in the mess of bad clip-art and spinning word images. They have all of the elements needed, but they’re not in any particular order, and it’s hard to find what you’re looking for. I can hardly recommend how to make it better, except “kill it all and start from scratch”. Use simple colours, fewer images, no clip-art. Be consistent with font colours and sizes, and organize, organize, organize! Do NOT use transparent block elements over image backgrounds, EVER – your readability just failed. And please, please, PLEASE – no FLASHING images or texts. Your website will be left behind in the dust. Besides being unappealing, this website makes them look incredibly unprofessional – I wouldn’t buy from them. Final say: just scrap it and start over, guys. Really.
Okay, the stupid cloud background made sense for FLIGHT UNIFORMS, but.. for a driving school? This background is more irritating than the first, even, because it’s not a fixed background – it scrolls! This is distracting and headache inducing all by itself. And the use of the huge red asterisks leads to the page stretching, so it scrolls to double its width. And I’m not even getting started. Abuse of marquees, a random and relatively hard-to-read weather feature (which attracts the eye more than the logo, bad idea), animated images (what does your country’s flag have to do with driving, guys?), horribly over-done bevel-edge tables, and the use of HUGE text that is coloured in no particular order – bad, worse, worst. From an aesthetic standpoint, this page is dead and gone. But functionality has failed, too – why is the navigation at the BOTTOM of the page and nowhere else? Horrible choice. And there are too many irrelevant additions, such as the aforementioned flag, a Goodyear tire image (yes, I know cars use tires, but how does that effect ability to drive?) and the Amber Alert marquees. It’s great that they want to stop child abductions and all, but it’s not relevant to the website, and should certainly not be displayed so prominently – like BEFORE the navigation! No, no, no! I hate to say it, but I’m going to give the same advice as before – scrap it and try again. Use fewer images (and relevant ones) and skip the irrelevant widget-type items (or if you must have them, organize them at the bottom or on a page specifically for things you support), no crazy background, no excessive bevels, and ORGANIZE. This website is so out of sorts, I can’t find much of ANYTHING. Organize your content so that it makes sense and is in a logical order – that includes PROMINENT navigation. And above and beyond all, make it clear, simple and cohesive. Otherwise, this page is wasted.
So. There’s that. And I believe that 1440 is greater than 200 words – sorry if I typed your eyes off. ;D
Also, a recently released project I worked on with the lovely James O’Brien (aka Cimmerian) – RantMedia. I thought an example of organization was in order. :]]
♥ Britagne